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Post by DarknessDevouring on Mar 27, 2014 0:37:01 GMT 1
Name: Rika Genatain Age: 17 Gender: Female Birthday: October 13 School Year: 4th year Arcana: Lovers Class: 4-A
Appearance: She has a slender athletic build. A late bloomer she looks 12 despite being 17. She has pale smooth skin three freckles on each cheek and a crescent moon birthmark on the back of her neck. Voice: Her voice is soft and quiet until angered then its growly. Hair: Red shoulder length tie back in a welding wendy style Eyes: Green Height: 4"6 Weight: 146 lb Clothes: Baggy blue jeans. Baggy pink shirt. White running shoes. A silver locket.
Inventory: Cell phone. Silver locket with picture of parents. Wallet. Swiss army knife. Strengths: Camping, cooking, and hunting. Weaknesses: Computers, school, and dancing. Habits: Reading comics before bed. Jogging before school. Watches too much t.v. Likes: Camping, fishing, sports, comics, cartoons. Dislikes: Studying, eggs, cooking, horror stories.
History: Her mother died in child birth. Raised by her father she became tomboyish. Camping with her father she learned survival skills. With no mother she took up the task of cooking for her father despite hating it. Her father had lost several jobs forcing them to move around. Her young appearance embraces her so she wheres baggy clothes to cover it up. Extremely shy she speaks very little until she starts to get close to someone. Her silver locket is all she has of her late mother. It has a picture of her father and mother together in it. She is now transferring to a new school as her father gets a new job in town.
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Post by DarknessDevouring on Mar 27, 2014 10:30:54 GMT 1
Persona: Aphrodite Arcana: Lovers Looks: Beautiful beyond belief. Blond hair. Wearing a toga History: Goddess of love daughter of Zeus and Hera. She spreads love to the world. Skills: Garu Dia Sacrifice. Weapon: Bow and arrow (piercing) Armor: Scarf Strength: Wind Weakness: Electricity Fusion attack: Embrace (chance of causing charm)
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Post by DarknessDevouring on Mar 27, 2014 10:31:01 GMT 1
True persona: Hua Mulan Armor: leather Weapon: bow silver arrow
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Post by DarknessDevouring on Mar 27, 2014 10:41:28 GMT 1
Persona (Initial): Appearance makes no sense. "Beautiful beyond belief"? Yeah that's real easy. Explain HOW she looks. Everyone got their own definition of 'beautiful'. Needs longer back story. Refer to 'character'. Skills: There's only 3 of those. Add all of them. You have up to 8. Weapon/armor: What's the name of the weapons? You just said what the weapons ARE. E.g Goddess Bow and Mother's Scarf could be the name of your equipment. Fusion attack: 1) It needs to be able to deal damage. 2) It needs a physical or magical element. 3) It needs a certain chance of inflicting status ailments (if added). 4) You need to describe what happens when it's activated. Not just the effect.
True Persona: Her full name is Hua Mulan. Added that for you. Armor: ...Leather what? Weapon: See 'initial Persona'. Also, need a history section. And - again - it has to be long. Appearance is required, too.
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Post by DarknessDevouring on Mar 27, 2014 16:27:18 GMT 1
Makes sense. Character accepted. Add your Persona once you're done with her.
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Post by rika Genatain on Mar 27, 2014 16:55:48 GMT 1
Persona: Aphrodite Arcana: Lovers Looks: Flawless smooth skin, tall and thin with a curvy body. Violet eyes that pierces through you. Blond hair. Wearing a toga History: Goddess of love daughter of Zeus and Hera. She had a love affair with Aries god of war. Favoring lovers with her blessing she protects them from harm. Falling in love with a mortal she gave up her godly powers for him. Angered by this Aries set a war upon the land. With her love killed and her godly powers gone she wondered the world in sorrow.She spreads love to the world. Skills: 1: Garu 2: Dia 3: Sacrifice 4: Hama 5: Rakukaja 6: Holy arrow 7: Tarukaja 8: Sukukaja. Weapon: Goddess bow Armor: Sacred scarf Strength: Wind Weakness: Electricity Fusion attack: Embrace deals medium strike damage with a 50% of inflicting charm. Aphrodite hugs the opponent. Upon contact, light emits from her.
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Post by rika Genatain on Mar 27, 2014 17:31:32 GMT 1
True persona: hua mulan Apearance: a female warrior dressed in oriental armor of a brown color. Black hair pokeing out of a demon mask helmet. History: to protect her father she went to war in his place pretending to be a man. Fighting many battles to save her country. She fell in love with a fellow soilder and revieled her secret to him. Upon reveiling this lover betrayed her forceing her to flee the contry. She spent the next year recovering from heartbreak while continueing to protect her contry in secret. This whent on until she once again met her old lover whom was remorseful for his actions. The two would go on to save the country and bring honor to their families before marring. Arcana: lovers Weapon: heros bow Armor: warriors scarf Strength: wind Weakness: eletricity Skills change: matarukaja. Masukukaja. Fusion attack:sacrificing blow( peirceing) heavy damage. Ignores all ailments to perform a frontal assault with no regards to safty striking with her sword. Almost always hits75% chance of connecting. (Knocks character out after use)upon contact.
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Post by DarknessDevouring on Mar 27, 2014 17:43:18 GMT 1
Not complaining but you can change both Tarukaja and Sukukaja to Matarukaja and Masukukaja, respectively. Both are tier 3 spells.
History: STILL short. On both.
Fusion attack... I'm letting it slide on Aphrodite (...as that's pretty much the most awesome fusion attack I have ever seen).
Hua Mulan's... I'm GUESSING it's supposed to say "got a 75% chance to connect"? Also, the fact that it knocks her out afterwards is... Unusual. Eh, your problem, not mine. Also, just making this clear: does it knock her out EVEN if she misses with her Fusion Attack? Just curious!
Rest is fine.
Also, I'm editing some of your typos. Nothing major but it's mainly for the sake of being able to read easier. I mean no offense with it, mind you!
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Post by rika Genatain on Mar 27, 2014 18:13:51 GMT 1
I've done some of the research for my personas but took a lot of poetic license on them. However I'm having troubl with the history suggestions are welcome oh and thank you on the spelling. I'm bad at it.
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Post by DarknessDevouring on Mar 28, 2014 10:22:38 GMT 1
Sorry about the delay. Anyway, I meant that you can change your skills on Aphrodite (7 and 8) to Matarukaja and Masukukaja respectively. It's your choice in the end.
As for history... Do like me if you can't think of something; just C&P it all from Wikipedia! (Not forbidden, mind you).
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